Hmmnnn…. This is not a great fanfiction for me. First, the mc is not cool. No matter how the author portrayed the mc as a cool person, it was simply tragic. Second, the monologue writing, the words, action. The flow of the plot is quite decent for the most part, its just when i read it, it does not give a sense of fulfillment. I read some amazing novel and fanfiction before this one, great and mature wordings, nice grammar, great plot, great twist and the last thing i want no romance. Which is why reading this gives me a downcast feeling and dissapointment. Anyway, better luck with your book. Hope you can bring something amazing for me to read. I stop reading after their introduction in the first day of highschool. I can’t take the cringeness when i read it….
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