hello I'm Eva Fingers author of Adopted Children. and this is my first English novel, please give me suggestions and input so that I can develop even more, thank you

Ithe best story, i like this. Mesya the cute girl, with creepy familly. They is pyshicopat familly....... [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

first time making English story but the result is good??? oh dude.. 😭😭 think I have to learn more, it's a good story. the plot is so interesting!

Amazing story' ... Interesting to read and makes me can't stop being curious.. I really like this work [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Mesya, her wish become come true but the facts are so different with her hopes. New scary life for Mesya, i can not imagine how the way she facing the murder in her new family.

bagus kak ceritanya. alur ceritanya jelas dan mudah untuk di pahami. semangat buat pengarangnya. aku tunggu bab bab selanjutnya, pokoknya segara yaaaa

Very interesting story. I really like. waiting for the continuation bro[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

It's in English… I'll put it in the library and I'll read it. If you read the synopsis, it makes you curious. Basically, keep the author motivated🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

At first I was only interested in reading it... it turned out to be an interesting and interesting story... recommended for friends who have not read to visit the novel... Thor's spirit... 💪💪💪