Review Detail of empressblackrose09 in Novel moved, search "Falling Stardust" to find it. thank you!

Feels like a mix of a medieval and interstellar era for me. The first few chapters are great and even though the chapters are not that much longer, I can picture out the world-building in my own imagination. Just a piece of advice for the synopsis, it would be better if you expand it more that could attract more readers. Might as well put some excerpt on the synopsis so that readers would be thrilled what would happens next ^_^ Also for the book cover, you might need to change that if you want to attract more readers since readers tend to look first at the book cover and synopsis before they could dive into your novel. ^_^ Grammars and stuff, no problem with that! It's easy to read and understandable. And fun as well! ^_^ Hope my little advice could help you! ^_^ All in all, perfect for me! ^_^ Keep up the work, author! ^_^