Here are my honest thought about this novel based from what I read so far, World Building: The world-building is pretty interesting with a lot of interesting locations such as a flying city and a unique type of landscape. But, I do believe the author will expand more about the whole world itself to make it more interesting to be explore. I also like the author put some kind of lore in this novel in a form of showing. Character: Xeik as the main character is pretty decent and quite original compare to some MC in webnovel. Yes, he have a relantionship with Blossom that I believe the author will expand more and he is an easy going guy too. I also can't wait for the future development he will have in the futures. As for the side characters, they all seem fine especially that they have a distinct personality with one another. However, I want to give some suggestion for the side character to have a significant role and development to make the story much more interesting. I am also sorry to say this especially this is quite my nitpicky advice. I suggest the author to give more showing about the character reaction and even feeling, so it can make character more fleshed out and deeper to understand or in simplest way, reduce the telling for the character. Overall, that's all I have to say about this novel and I do believe this novel has a potential. Thank you very much and keep up the good work!!
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thanks for the feedback, i still struggle with showing v telling, it'm new so hopefully i can improve with time
It's fine, I am also struggle too sometime and the best suggestion is just keep practice, I know your book have potential
You get it!
