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2024-11-19 09:07

Hhhhggggggggggggggggggggggggghhghhhhhhhhh not good at all

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Dahoosa
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From one author to another, I have to say this is good content as far as wish fulfillment of OP MC indulging in naughty fantasies goes. Amon gets a kick out of going slow and teasing his prey. Definitely is not for everyone, since Amon is immortal and doesn't love any of the girls (yet). He is also a fairly laid-back kind of guy. The second chapter illustrates this well. If you are trying to judge this against a more fleshed out nertori novel like Sinful Life of the Emperor, you're probably going to be disappointed. This is as generic as they come, but even a generic ero' can be enjoyable, much like Reality TV. Writing quality: English does not seem to be the author's main language. It is easy to tell with the frequent run-on sentences and miscellaneous typos. Despite these issues, they are minor enough not to ruin the flow of the story. Anyone reading this is probably not here for beautiful grammar anyway. 4 Stability of updates: No problems here. 5 Story Development: Still young, but the tone and style of the story leads me to believe that there will be no conflicts that Amon cannot easily overcome with his power. The current story itself reminds me of a combination of a bunch of different h-doujins smacked together. 5 Character Design: Interactions and dialogue are well done. Author switches to female POV occasionally to get in their heads on how their corruption is coming along and how unsatisfied and needy their nethers are. Otherwise, the female characters don't waste wordage talking about their issues or going in-depth into their backstories. This is appropriate, because the readers don't really care either. 5 World Background: Modern world and University setting. No problems here. 5 All I gotta say to you Author is keep doing your thing and don't worry about the haters. I'll keep reading :D

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