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Review Detail of America_Yea in Rise of Mana: Renewal of The Will

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America_Yea
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I'm giving this a 5 stars for a multitude of reasons, not the least of which is the author is quite friendly and willing to work on major problems if they are pointed out in a friendly manner. Ok so the english quality here is quite high, so far I have been perfectly satisfied with what I have read being well above the quality of many of the novels on this site. Story wise the novel starts out admitedly on a rather dark note but it seems to be easing out of that gradually while the reasoning behind how things work and world context make pretty good sense so setting and storyline wise both also get full marks from me. Overall any novel that can keep me on the edge of my seat and hold my attention as well as this one has deserves some decent attention and so here we are, so far this one looks promising enough that I won't stop reading till the end or the novel burns down in a flaming ball of negativity(which I really don't think will happen) I'm a gust fanboy and love the atelier series in particular, just deal with it, I was bound to give it 5 stars just for that but I came out pleasantly surprised so far I really like what I am reading. Now what are you waiting for, go on, read it, and enjoy.

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Rise of Mana: Renewal of The Will

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Storyteller54_
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It's a fan fiction light novel of the Playstation 2 Game: Atelier Iris. But of course the plot in the story is of my making.

Afonso_Aaron:Didn't starded reading this fic yet but is this an orignale story or an fanfic ? And is there a hárèm ?
America_Yea
America_YeaLv3America_Yea

Lol seems someone beat me me to the first review. anyways I tried to give a somewhat meaty review without going too far into the details. only reason I waited so long is I like to have a decent chunk of story to sink my claws into before I tell anyone my experiences.

Storyteller54_
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Thank you so much, this will fuel up my motivation to write better. I will do my best to strive to be a better writer for my readers. The review is largely appreciated, it's nice to see someone actually read my stuff 😊

Afonso_Aaron
Afonso_AaronLv5Afonso_Aaron

Didn't starded reading this fic yet but is this an orignale story or an fanfic ? And is there a hárèm ?

Storyteller54_:Thank you so much, this will fuel up my motivation to write better. I will do my best to strive to be a better writer for my readers. The review is largely appreciated, it's nice to see someone actually read my stuff 😊
Storyteller54_
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Unfortunately, it's not a harem, but it could be a possibility tho.

Afonso_Aaron:Didn't starded reading this fic yet but is this an orignale story or an fanfic ? And is there a hárèm ?