Review Detail of Akira_Monadelle in Hot Coffee

This novel is actually pretty fun to read. It's realistically depicted and appeals to real life situations. The novel has a cliche and slightly predictable plot with the CEO and his secretary or assistant thing but I'm excited to see how this author will make her take on the plot interesting and unique. There were quite a few errors with grammar, sentence structure and punctuation that made the novel a bit confusing at times. The paragraphs were also a bit too long so I suggest shorter paragraphs to make the chapters a bit more attractive. There's only 3 chapters at the moment so I can't really comment on the flow and story development. I also recommend that the author re-reads her chapters before publishing since there are a few typos. Overall, this novel has a lot of potential. Despite the errors, it was a good and entertaining read. This plot is my favorite in romance novels so I hope this author doesn't disappoint but after reading Mr. Night, I'm sure she won't. [img=recommend]