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slackerlifeLv112yr
2022-05-27 23:11

The ending was so sudden and rushed as though the author got lazy and decided to just quickly end it there rather than simply making the scenes longer. There wasn't even an explanation about the relationship between MC and her biological parents, whether if it's true or not that he rparents were involved with the ML's poisoning event. It didn't even explain more how MC even ended up under Meng Qin and simply excused that it was due to poison, but like how cause I really couldn't understand. Also, about the three senior brothers she was with on that valley, what happened to them? Not only that, what was MC's real background in concern with her biological family? What about with what happened to ML when he and the Lu Family suddenly disappeared? So many questions that hasn't even been answered yet, like seriously. Besides this, I freaking wanted to see more of MC showing off her talent, like bruh, cause literally most of the time, she's always considered as a country bumpkin and worthless girl.

Real or Fake Missy : I Have a Piece of Godly Land

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Roxanne_Woods
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This week trial read has some really good novels, including this one! The FL is so funny haha 😂 Only twenty chapters but I can already say I absolutely adore her. The other characters are also interesting. Can't say anything about a ML since that third master of the summary has yet to appear. Don't hesitate to read that book, it's soooo worth it! 😍

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Soukkii
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That time you liked everyone else's post who were as disappointed as you with the super abrupt ending 😭😭😭😭 Because the rest of the story was so good up to that point. Like wth?

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Carmen_Reynal
Carmen_ReynalLv15

I was truly enjoying the story until the last chapter. The ending was so abrupt and was not explained, at all. I am so bummed, I was expecting a much better ending to the story. It needs at least one more chapter to explain and finish it all to leave the readers with a sense of completion.

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Mizkikki
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Very good book...right until the end. no spoilers but the end made me feel like I wasted my time reading this. I wonder why really it was ended like that. #ifyouknowthenyouknow.

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Daoist193176
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RAWS PLEASE? 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 THIS IS SOOO GOOOODDDD, HOOEFULLY THISNEILL GET PICKEDDDDDDD YAYSSS ......♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

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Cinnamon_Apple_4762
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so disappointed in the ending. too abrupt. no explanation. no romance. started out great. was so looking forward to these characters interacting more, fall in love... but nope. such a huge disappointment .

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Geo7594
Geo7594Lv15

whats with the premium? so expensive. not gonna spend $50 plus just to read more chapters. webnovel has change since the beginning.. the price is ridiculous. theyve changed the title and cant find the raws. there are a lot of good novels but is bit continuous. note to webnovel, if the books are not selected, at least reveal the original title of the novel so we can read the raws. thanks

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Bingereader0w0
Bingereader0w0Lv15

READERS BEWARE!! The ending is INCREDIBLY abrupt. When it almost got to the climax where they could’ve give us answers to the mysteries and unanswered questions in the book, they cut off with no explanation at all and then boom! hugs and the end—literally. A good book with so much potential that was left on the shelf to collect dust. 2/10 because although good, didn’t give what it was supposed to give. PLEASE go back when you have time and give us more!!! More context please.

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LilythLight
LilythLightLv13

Dearest author, can you please give us an explanation... this ending............Why?!?!😭 Or... Are you planning on writing another book but from his point of view?

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KahaniKiDunya
KahaniKiDunyaLv11

Abrupt ending. No questions answered at all. The fine story line was killed suddenly. Not cool at all. Treating readers as joke and wasting their time.

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