Review Detail of piustheone in The Lord Is Too Overbearing
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the grammer is bad. words are missing in sentences which brings you out of the experience. in some cases certain worlds are used that contradicts the sentence afterwords
The Lord Is Too Overbearing
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Yes, that is one of the many weaknesses of this Novel of mind. Since I work on this alone—can't afford an editor yet—I often miss that out. Though, the main reason is still my "special" condition—I have minor dyslexia; should've warned people in the beginning. Thank you for giving it a chance though😁 I am still trying to be a better writer each day!