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MystiGlacier06
MystiGlacier06Lv113yr
2021-11-17 21:22

Its good just the mc's personality is inconsistent it is always narrated as cold but he pats every girl that crying and girls fall in love with him at first sight

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Frona_Gorgophone
Frona_GorgophoneAuthor

Thank you for the honest review!😊

MystiGlacier06
MystiGlacier06Lv11

I will come back in the future it has so much potential though, it's just the personality that irked me. Good work author.

Frona_Gorgophone:Thank you for the honest review!😊
Sagara_Sanosuke
Sagara_SanosukeLv1

Author would have deleted your review if you have given lower than 3 star. Without harem tag and deceiving people with intro and early chapters later making it another generic underage little girl catcher for harem.

reqrwq2
reqrwq2Lv3

Novel with a harem of underaged little girl. And author deletes review if someone speaks the truth or gives low star

Frona_Gorgophone:Thank you for the honest review!😊
Frona_Gorgophone
Frona_GorgophoneAuthor

I don't look at the stars you give, I look at the content. I don't care if you give me 1 star if you give me a valid point like this guy. But, yours didn't, mate. You are concluding the entire story based on your misconception from the first ten chapters (?). Next time, don't skim. Properly read it. If have any input in someone's work, make it as objective as possible. Don't hate someone's work just because it doesn't suit your taste. "If you are afraid to get dirty, walking away from a mud is better than dipping your feet in it. Raging right after you get dirty, because you decided the otherwise, is an act of a fool." —Me I hope you still have enough braincells to understand what I mean.

Sagara_Sanosuke:Author would have deleted your review if you have given lower than 3 star. Without harem tag and deceiving people with intro and early chapters later making it another generic underage little girl catcher for harem.
OPRamenGuy
OPRamenGuyLv14

Is it a harem of underaged girls tho

Frona_Gorgophone:I don't look at the stars you give, I look at the content. I don't care if you give me 1 star if you give me a valid point like this guy. But, yours didn't, mate. You are concluding the entire story based on your misconception from the first ten chapters (?). Next time, don't skim. Properly read it. If have any input in someone's work, make it as objective as possible. Don't hate someone's work just because it doesn't suit your taste. "If you are afraid to get dirty, walking away from a mud is better than dipping your feet in it. Raging right after you get dirty, because you decided the otherwise, is an act of a fool." —Me I hope you still have enough braincells to understand what I mean.
Frona_Gorgophone
Frona_GorgophoneAuthor

Nah. Why will I make one? Dude was just skimming my novel, concluding that mental age is the same as a physical age. (This is the case: MC is 56 y.o. very young looking man reincarnated to his younger self—16 y.o. Since he is of that age, of course, he will find himself among his peers. Due to unique charm, appearance—of course—and his "talent", many girls of his age are interested in him.) Not only that, dude also misunderstood every anime gigs I have written as the MC's journey to collect chicks like post stamps. All of that was done to lighten up the mood. It's very brief, you will only encounter them in a few paragraphs in every twenty or so paragraphs—I guess. It completely stopped after chapter 60 and further though. The plot has thickened, and "lightening up the mood" is no longer my priority.

OPRamenGuy:Is it a harem of underaged girls tho
yb48
yb48Lv13

so is this a harem? better a harem novel than a novel with an mc never interested in women,

Frona_Gorgophone:Nah. Why will I make one? Dude was just skimming my novel, concluding that mental age is the same as a physical age. (This is the case: MC is 56 y.o. very young looking man reincarnated to his younger self—16 y.o. Since he is of that age, of course, he will find himself among his peers. Due to unique charm, appearance—of course—and his "talent", many girls of his age are interested in him.) Not only that, dude also misunderstood every anime gigs I have written as the MC's journey to collect chicks like post stamps. All of that was done to lighten up the mood. It's very brief, you will only encounter them in a few paragraphs in every twenty or so paragraphs—I guess. It completely stopped after chapter 60 and further though. The plot has thickened, and "lightening up the mood" is no longer my priority.
Frona_Gorgophone
Frona_GorgophoneAuthor

Hmm... There is a high possibility it won't be—there is already a fixed love interest. But, who knows? I'll let time show me the way I shall choose

yb48:so is this a harem? better a harem novel than a novel with an mc never interested in women,
GifflarGod
GifflarGodLv14

any update on that? will there be harem?

Frona_Gorgophone:Hmm... There is a high possibility it won't be—there is already a fixed love interest. But, who knows? I'll let time show me the way I shall choose
Frona_Gorgophone
Frona_GorgophoneAuthor

From the way I develop the story, it is highly likely no. The thicker the plot gets, the harder I find myself to insert romance inside the story.

GifflarGod:any update on that? will there be harem?
AimanFaroqq
AimanFaroqqLv15

i want harem

Frona_Gorgophone:From the way I develop the story, it is highly likely no. The thicker the plot gets, the harder I find myself to insert romance inside the story.
Quarter_Pounder
Quarter_PounderLv3

well girls do like handsome men and its probably not a harem novel, there is a 'special reason' he patts their head, you will know if you read furthur~

Quarter_Pounder
Quarter_PounderLv3

Roasted😏😏

Frona_Gorgophone:I don't look at the stars you give, I look at the content. I don't care if you give me 1 star if you give me a valid point like this guy. But, yours didn't, mate. You are concluding the entire story based on your misconception from the first ten chapters (?). Next time, don't skim. Properly read it. If have any input in someone's work, make it as objective as possible. Don't hate someone's work just because it doesn't suit your taste. "If you are afraid to get dirty, walking away from a mud is better than dipping your feet in it. Raging right after you get dirty, because you decided the otherwise, is an act of a fool." —Me I hope you still have enough braincells to understand what I mean.
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