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KayLillyt_1
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2021-10-02 05:27

A fascinating read. The writer does a great job of creating the characters, describing it all and telling the story. It’s so easy to imagine. Almost like a movie in the readers heads. It is very well done.

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Thank you for your kind review![img=recommend]

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I'm usually more of a fanfiction guy rather than one to hang around the original stories section, but, luckily in this case, I found myself stumbling up on this relatively hidden gem with loads of tags that I couldn't help but love, I mean #genious,#system,#dark,#immortal and a few more iconic ones, like, why are you not giving this a chance yet? :P Anyway, since if you are still reading this is seems that you need a bit more convincing before giving it a try, so, after having red a good ~60 or so chapters just to make sure that the quality was consistent in the long run, I'll say my piece on it: The story, as the synopsis say, is the one of a guy who, through incredible and unprecedented efforts from his part, reached the pinnacle of what humanity had to offer in the fight against hordes of demons spawning from the 72 Obelisks scattered across the Earth. In this setting, humans pick between being Mages or Knights (like a rpg class), and our guy, despite being (what he believed to be) the self made pinnacle of both, after "suffering a set back" we shall say, finds himself all the way back to his younger days when he was nothing but a 16 years old, scrawny, bullied kid with no magical talents to speak of and only a super handsome (but feminine) face as his saving grace, but worry not, as this time around he not only has all the memories of his several decades long journey to the top that he went through in his previous life, but also an awesome system (which acts more like a sassy encyclopedia really) on top, which, when questioned, tells him the "true" ways to reach the pinnacle, leaving him all too often completely baffled about his original misconceptions regarding the way to go about growing in strength which he believed to be ineffable, creating some very amusing interactions between the two, while at the same time giving him an opportunity to embark on his journey back to the pinnacle way sooner and smoother than he did in his previous life! But worry not, the MC will always keep an aura of superiority towards his peers, and elders alike, showing off his talents and knowledge whenever its possible as if it was the most natural thing in the World to do while charming all the onlookers along the way, because, after all, The Lord Is Too Overbearing!! ^_^

MisterEditor
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A Webnovel masterpiece to be made. A novel with limitless potential and i can just do nothing but imagine in what direction this story will unfold in the coming updates. This novel plot is cliche that is sure but story development is so very unique in a way and the world in novel is so mysterious, many things still hidden in the dark. From what i know Author didn't mention the name of this world in novel yet(i am waiting for it just so you know dear author). Characters are some real some cliched, some generic dialogues could be seen in the novel. Family of MC is described good, whether it's his pretending family or real (which is mystery till now). I would like to say that it could have been better, i am sure you also know that yourself dear Author. MC overbearing character is amazing fleshed out. His character is written so nicely that I can feel Author's dedication in writing the main character. His dialogues are not overly concerned, not forced jokes, not insanely hilarious (as in mostly edgelord Chinese drama) and is meticulous and he knows where and what to say and not ro say. After MC character my most favourite character is Iliana and next favourite is Vagus. Here i would say that I would have wanted to read a moment between Vagus and MC after the death of Irene but that didn't happen. That scene would have highlighted the warm and emotional serious( motherly only as reference) side of Vagus that was hinted at various points in the novel. Lastly I would give my best wishes to dear Author for his amazing creation and future updates. May God bless as you don't left behind any character in your novel😅🤣🤣. Here is end bye bye dear Author 💐💐

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