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TheFateAvenue
TheFateAvenueLv33yr
2021-11-30 21:42

I love the novel for it character development and story and background and The mc personality But i find it sad that only 23 chapter are only free i wish there where more free chapter because i dont have enough to pay For the rest so maybe when i can spare some things i will continue to read and man keep Doing the work You do so when i pay for chapter I can buy it it bulk Awesome Novel my man have a blessed day

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Frona_Gorgophone
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Thank you for the kind review!

TheFateAvenue
TheFateAvenueLv3

Your welcome man

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A Webnovel masterpiece to be made. A novel with limitless potential and i can just do nothing but imagine in what direction this story will unfold in the coming updates. This novel plot is cliche that is sure but story development is so very unique in a way and the world in novel is so mysterious, many things still hidden in the dark. From what i know Author didn't mention the name of this world in novel yet(i am waiting for it just so you know dear author). Characters are some real some cliched, some generic dialogues could be seen in the novel. Family of MC is described good, whether it's his pretending family or real (which is mystery till now). I would like to say that it could have been better, i am sure you also know that yourself dear Author. MC overbearing character is amazing fleshed out. His character is written so nicely that I can feel Author's dedication in writing the main character. His dialogues are not overly concerned, not forced jokes, not insanely hilarious (as in mostly edgelord Chinese drama) and is meticulous and he knows where and what to say and not ro say. After MC character my most favourite character is Iliana and next favourite is Vagus. Here i would say that I would have wanted to read a moment between Vagus and MC after the death of Irene but that didn't happen. That scene would have highlighted the warm and emotional serious( motherly only as reference) side of Vagus that was hinted at various points in the novel. Lastly I would give my best wishes to dear Author for his amazing creation and future updates. May God bless as you don't left behind any character in your novel😅🤣🤣. Here is end bye bye dear Author 💐💐

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