Review Detail of daoistkitty in My Super Power is called "Level Up"

The premise is good, though it feels obviously taken from other sources, but what story isn’t bow a days. i could barely get through the first chapter cause of the horrible grammer. Even if you can fix the grammer as you read it still makes it impossible to get too into the story. If the author can fix his grammer, make the story flow just a little better. I can see this story getting a manga adaptation, at minimum a fan made one.