Review Detail of Pixiepiu in An Undying Love Story

You brought the last scene first like a movie which I liked and the first chapter was very emotional. Fantastic. And from the second to the third chapter, I also started to feel young with Lena. I would say the plot is very interesting with your writing. I am not saying anything about the world background because you have just started writing, there are not many chapters, maybe we will see more development after that. I would definitely recommend it to everyone. Great work. keep it up.