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hedgehoghug
hedgehoghugLv32yrhedgehoghug

Let me give an honest review. The first three chapters are definitely a hooker and perfectly pack. The introduction and interaction of characters are well-written. Author immediately gives an idea about the conflict and clearly distinguish the roles and characters' individual feelings. The narration is good. There's no block of text. The usage of adjectives and show and tell is excellent. However, the author is short on capitalizing letters, specially for nouns, and sentence errors in which I think can be further improve. Overall, the story is excellent.

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Lord Qui, I'm Nothing But a Mere Mortal

Sky_Li

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hedgehoghug
hedgehoghugLv3hedgehoghug

By the way, I suggest you use comma instead of colon in your title. It will be much pleasing to see it that way. You can also capitalize the beginning letters of the subject and predicate to give a better effect. For instance, Lord Qui, I'm Nothing but a Mere Mortal.

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Sky_LiAuthorSky_Li

I will take my corrections and see into it, thanks for the honest review and I hope to give it my best😌💗✨