Let me give an honest review. The first three chapters are definitely a hooker and perfectly pack. The introduction and interaction of characters are well-written. Author immediately gives an idea about the conflict and clearly distinguish the roles and characters' individual feelings. The narration is good. There's no block of text. The usage of adjectives and show and tell is excellent. However, the author is short on capitalizing letters, specially for nouns, and sentence errors in which I think can be further improve. Overall, the story is excellent.
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