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2021-11-12 18:43

I have never given a 1* on this site before. Here we have a poor quality system story where the author is not at all faithful to his own concepts. So he gives his MC a 1000 fold system where things that he gains are multiplied by 1000X. This 1000X is very arbitrary as the author only seems to upgrade everything that he gets from common to mythical tier. But no, that would make it too difficult to continue writing. He gets a defensive divine treasure and it is multiplied into a much more powerful version of it. He gets other treasures that do not trigger. It always triggers whenever a new species is added to his divine domain turning them all into mythical tier creatures, but it is very hit or miss on everything else. Later we find that chapters are repeating themselves and adding a few lines as the next chapter. I can only assume it is a translation error, but it almost does not seem like it. Just not worth reading in my impression. I have a few pet peeves that really get to me with story writing. One of the biggest ones is inconsistencies. Another one is when the author puts in his gimmick into the title and does not really utilize that gimmick. In this case the author utilizes the gimmick but does not set up any rules for it and just triggers it whenever he wants to add something, so this falls under a very inconsistent gimmick.

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