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Review Detail of LightningCatThief in Magic Recovering: Billion Folds Talent

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LightningCatThief
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Look at me I am the MC, have wasted 100 years of my life and not even learned a single thing. I know it is really hard d to write experienced characters when you yourself are just starting your life but this is bad even by webnovels standards. The MC thoughts and actions don't show his experience, they don't even make sense if you consider that the MC has adult children, which by the way should be over 40 years old by now.

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Magic Recovering: Billion Folds Talent

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GrandpaPeng
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Yeah I just checked it out, the MC might as well be a 18-year old boy with little kids. Sigh. In this regard (writing experienced characters) novels like Protect Our Patriarch/Ancestor Above do a better job, even Taoist Antecedent of Yellow Court does to some extent (mostly in game world).