Review Detail of UrsoNadador in Star Wars: Empires rise and fall

Hello writer! beforehand I notice that there will probably be spelling errors in this comment (I'm Brazilian and my first language is Portuguese, I had help from Google translator). About the story: It's fun to read and I'm looking forward to the next few chapters. Thank you for writing this story. A few more particular comments if you're interested: I think the protagonist is a bit lacking in personality, just motivated by hate or whatever, I'm saying that because I feel like he might end up being uninteresting. (If it's something necessary for the base of the plot I can only wait, but I recommend giving a boost to his character, he's kind of simple) And I'm 100% in favor of Xenophobia against other species, I think this theme is very naive in star wars. And it would be interesting to somehow "convert" padme (I'm sorry if I seem intrusive in your novel, but she's one of my favorite characters in SWs) to the side of human "purity" and maybe put them as a romantic pair ( it might be interesting to add one more "competitor" to "spice up" things hahahahah). As for the rest of the galaxy for me they can burn.