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Sonal_Lv12yrSonal_

This book is not really intriguing, the author tried but, it's just like the author copies from other authors, I wouldn't prescribe this book to anyone, I won't call it shit, it has good grammar but makes no sense, Well keep it up author try improving, you will get there but for now it's not that interesting it's just like what everyone else writes, Soo keep writing u might improve -----------------++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ well toodod and keep writing

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Immortal World System

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thanks for the review I will try my best to make my story more interesting, more engaging, and make it look what the story stands for. try to be more clear about my plot so no misunderstanding rises in near future. Thanks a lot for the review bye-bye.

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