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Hello, I just want to tell the writer that is story is a mess. You need to add more detail of Who talk or whos POV. The story is on a good start if you pass on the messy writing.

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The Tail Of Twins

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thanks for telling me your point of view. I am glad about that. Thanks. U can read my other story I SAW A SHOOTING STAR. I hope U will definitely like it. So please cheek it out.