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As much as I would like to give this an chance, story already makes absolutely no sense in first two chapters. Firstly, as usual for "wish" novels, mc included clearly multiple wishes in one wish. In this case three of the wishes included distinct multiple wishes. Secondly, first wish was so totally op it's ridiculous, basically mc can just use any ability he can think of. If author is putting these kinds of massive plot holes in the story right off the bat, it just doesn't make sense look further.

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I am in Kuroinu?

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