Yeah 5 stars.................................................................................................................................................

james-kun 2120 is right! The novel story and character building is very well but the clinche and cringe dialog is too much an...🤮 and... 🖐🤢 just a minute🤮 , ok now where were we oh!...and heroine character are good but all are ruin when mc appear infront them! The romance are so cringe that I🤢🤮 OK👌 that's all!🤥

Although it has an above average progression I hope u can stop putting cliche and cringe-ish line it's ok if you put some often but not alway though on some lemons or confessions I can't take the cringeness🤢🤮

I don't know how this MC deserve to be op he is complete idiot and that's my opinion I know that being op have no relation with being smart but still he is idiot. you can read and judge.

As much as I would like to give this an chance, story already makes absolutely no sense in first two chapters. Firstly, as usual for "wish" novels, mc included clearly multiple wishes in one wish. In this case three of the wishes included distinct multiple wishes. Secondly, first wish was so totally op it's ridiculous, basically mc can just use any ability he can think of. If author is putting these kinds of massive plot holes in the story right off the bat, it just doesn't make sense look further.

This boring 😩, nothing really important happening. It's already 7 chapters but only one day had passed in his 'Asora' dimension or something, and he need to stay there in 10 years?! what a boring book. This is all about mc making his boring life "happy" to the "fullest" by making some living expenses and other stuff to live and to continue living in his 50 meters Asora dimension or world in 10 YEARS ALONE, YES ALONE IN 10 YEARS!!

You know what funny here? I did read original author other work. The one about summertime saga. And man, I don't need even to write another review. Because it is the same and problems are still same. Like : -unbelievable amount of cringe. -retarted teenagers as mc. -love on a first sight -simple romance. - did I say that mc is low-life simp? You probably already guessed, but still. Oh yes, If you think that there whould be a real plot, no. This romance on a first sight with mc saving girls - is a plot. That's all....exactly that moment, that you understand why people dislike harem novels and disrespect them. Because we deserve it.

Thanks for doing the translation for this story and please keep up the good work that you are doing with it. 😁👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Before I start reading this... I really had to put this review down first 'cuz of how much pain, we, the MTL readers, had to endure to actually read the other version. Much appreciated, thank you very much for this.