Item: Reincarnated as Ling yun in ATG
Rating: 5
Author: FalgaGS

FalgaGSLv132yr

2022-01-23 11:56

i havent read it. But this review if for good luk. mdmdnndnsnnsnsnsnsndndjrgpfnienxwojxhlwfqlbdowjfownfowjdownrornownfiwrnowrjiqhibrirnibdowbduf

Reincarnated as Ling yun in ATG

Gfdsa

3.9

41 Chs

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What is author doing here... He destroyed all sects modernized the empire. WHY??? Remember that this is an ancient cultivation world so you should keep it such . This is not historical kingdoms genre where you will bring revolution by introducing modern things. And character development is utter bullsh#t.

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