Review Detail of srevdar in Eden’s Multiverse Journey

Reached chapter 6 and I think it's a good point to write a first impression... The writing seems good and easy to read so I have no issues there, but one think I dislike so far is the flow of the story... you went too fast my dude, and the dialogue I would have liked to read is not there... instead we have a quick summary. The romance so far is underwhelming... the reason for that is that only Aya has any kind of intro that isn't a few lines. You should have had some more detailed intros for new characters. Now the characters... the MC is supposed to be OAA and he uses his power to insert himself into the story... honestly I've seen this premise soooooo many times it does nothing for me. (Personaly the first thin I woyld do is kill of Kouki or at least do something to him... I never did understand the NEED to follow the original story when you're writing a fanfic) Arifureta is a great first world, but honestly you should have dedicated at least 2-3 chapters to world building and explaing the world to those that never read about it before... I'm satisfied for now so I will keep reading. A bit of advice if you write another story: FIRST IMPRESSION MATTERS!!!! Not many people have the patience like me to continue, even if the atory gets good later on. Keep it up 😁