- Review as of 20 chapters in: This is a transmigration system novel in a cultivation world that is ruled by sects. Our mc Is transmigrated into a 14 year old boy called Kai, who is a slave with nothing to his name and gets a system. Now unlike most systems I dont find it to be too op or broken yet, Which personally I like. Makes the mc seem more vulnerable, relatable and allows for growth. What does his system do you may ask? Read it and find out. •Writing Quality• Author has the occasional grammatical errors, however as an avid reader I read very quickly and build an idea of what is going on in my head therefore Isn’t noticable for me. The way author lays out system status is very nice and easy to read. •Story development• Unlike most sect creation novels, mc doesn’t (or has yet to) produce anything out of thin air such as a sect building. This gives the novel a nicer, slower pace than other sect building novels. This seems like a novel where we will see the mc work his way up step by step and toil away to build his sect. I say this because the Author might have foreshadowed mc becoming an alchemist in order to secure funds to operate his sect. Furthermore, bare in mind mc is only 14 years old. I imagine most sect leaders are much older than this and therefore may be quite a while before we see any actual sect development. However there are already signs of the mc’s first disciples, which is a good start. •World background• Author does a good job of slowly introducing the background world and not info dumping everything all at once. It also helps that mc knows almost nothing as well so as he learns we learn with him. All in all this looks like a novel with a lot of potential and was something I enjoyed reading. I wish that there were more chapters, so thanks author looking forwad to see what happens next 👍🏼✨
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Now that's what I call a synopsis, thank you very much!. The story will definitely be a lot slower paced than most, so you're 100% correct. Be prepared to see our MC grow step by step on his rise to the top! I'm writing this novel knowing full well that it will only appeal to a small niche audience, so seeing something like this is really motivating. Thank you again. P.S. I'm starting to use a grammar software to help catch my poor English xD, hopefully the quality will improve going forward.
hi
is the novel still getting regular updates?
Outta spite im not reasibg this novel. since i have to read it to know the system i cant be bothered to read it. Waste of tome smh.
So_Sa:Now that's what I call a synopsis, thank you very much!. The story will definitely be a lot slower paced than most, so you're 100% correct. Be prepared to see our MC grow step by step on his rise to the top! I'm writing this novel knowing full well that it will only appeal to a small niche audience, so seeing something like this is really motivating. Thank you again. P.S. I'm starting to use a grammar software to help catch my poor English xD, hopefully the quality will improve going forward.
Romance? Harem?
I wish I had a review like that for my own story. Its really comprehensive and would lead anyone to read this novel (at least thats my case). Well, anyway. I really like your review and I wish there were more of your reviews in other stories instead of the constant spamming bots that try to elevate a stories true worth even though its just garbage...
I suggest you use Grammarly. It’s helping depending on what you writing about
So_Sa:Now that's what I call a synopsis, thank you very much!. The story will definitely be a lot slower paced than most, so you're 100% correct. Be prepared to see our MC grow step by step on his rise to the top! I'm writing this novel knowing full well that it will only appeal to a small niche audience, so seeing something like this is really motivating. Thank you again. P.S. I'm starting to use a grammar software to help catch my poor English xD, hopefully the quality will improve going forward.
You're missing out, your loss.
Deku_Deku_3204:Outta spite im not reasibg this novel. since i have to read it to know the system i cant be bothered to read it. Waste of tome smh.
