Review Detail of Lu_Shui in Revenge of the Shaman

Just me supporting my first work :) Hi everyone, I am a new author in this site. I wrote a lot of fanfics before, but never an original story. Truthfully I am really nervous because when writing an original story it seems that there are so many things to think about! Hahaha. Anyway, if you do enjoy the story, welcome and I hope you enjoy your stay. Otherwise I would love to hear feedbacks for my improvement :)