Ok then. First thing, it's not too bad of a start. Secondly who is in the harem? Thirdly, are you going to just do Demon Slayer or expand to other worlds? Fourthly, does the dungeon master thingy give him features of a gamer? Lastly, it's not often you find a demon slayer type of fanfic so I hope you continue and finish this. Good luckšš½
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