Review Detail of Yap28 in Naruto: Kage Of The Rain

alright looks promising, it's been awhile since we got a promising one, but i cant say more since its only 1 chapter, an advice for author dont make the mc too OP or making him OP so fast, u prob gonna be confused later on and dropped it lol, take it slow, dont ruin the story by making it so dark like some others, and u got a pretty nice idea about those constellation things from korean manhwa lol, good luck writing author this old veteran gonna keep watching till u dropped it or wreck it