I love the story i have always hoped to see a Spartacus fan fic but i never find one and this after finding it was great!!! the only thing i have a bug about is the mc we don't even know what he looks like other than he has long hair that he puts up before fight not even color of it, height, weight, eye color, ethnicity(there were so many in the show), looks anything:/ but other than that i love story!!!

The story pace is a little slow for my taste but overall so foar I've liked the storytelling. This looks like one of those that can successfully be completed as a fanfic and not pulled to hiatus and forgotten about. I mean the story development has been excellent but needs to work on the update stability, it's fluctuating.

I don't know how to start..... I just find the character's behavior very stupid, I mean his actions haven't been the most reasonable until now and I don't think they will be in the future.your writing is good, but the plot of this is rubbish.I don't understand how there can be people who can like this well everyone has their tastes

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First of all I think the writing quality is good. The problem I have is the MC just doesnt even try to hide his abilities, constantly pulling stuff from nowhere infront of people he has known for all but weeks if that, and then you start to introduce stuff from other worlds that he seems to have an unlimited supply of like mithral and vibranium, which started to put me off. The final thing that made me drop this is when he somehow managed to create a camera randomly, like really? his ability went from producing food and water to being able to create whatever he wanted how long before he just makes the Iron Man suit or something. :/

a great start fofor an author, you get five star just because you are the first. and being the first in doing something always merits privilage .

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I love this fanfic and i hope the author picks it back up because it is so rare to see quality Spartacus Fanfictions. Just hope the author gives us a new chapter soon.