Review Detail of iLhamzki in Overplayer

Hello guys, Author here. This is my first time writing a webnovel in English, so I hope you don't mind if there's something wrong with my grammar or spelling. Even so, feel free to correct it if you want (It's good to improve my English more.) Oh yeah, feel free to leave CnC in the comment and tell your thought about this novel. (Please don't use any harsh words, I'm okay with critique comment one star as long as there's no harsh word in it) Thank you for coming!