This, to be honest is the best Naruto fan fiction I have ever read. It is simply stunning, it is also a comedic masterpiece. The depth of emotion and the interactions between the characters are beautifully written. Quite often when you read the typical fanfic it glosses over the formative years of Naruto’s life and skips straight to academy graduation with very little to no actual detail about what he does. Or the other most common trope of a 5 ish chapter long training montage that starts when he is two and just spams shadow clones. As of chapter 18 my honest opinion on this fanfic has no rival of similar length on this platform. Thank you author for this beautiful story and good luck with all future chapters

Simply bad, there's no point reading this story, the MC is useless, his sister is an useless OC who brings nothing to the story. The author can't stick to one Perspective to save his life, seriously when the author change between 1st and 3rd perspective every two sentences it's a clear sign to drop the story...

1 year time skip for nothing? He's doing nothing for what he intended to do to prevent Uchiha Massacres. By reaching out to Itachi. 😅😅😅😅 Poor Itachi. What a pity. I know because you were so lazy so there is no major change for the entire plot. But, instead of that, you were ruining everything for that forced drama.

Read this book on fanfiction.net and loved it. Just one thing. Is this really going to be a harem story? I thought you of all wouldn't follow that trope? Considering your other harry potter fanfic has a single love interest.

I can't see the potential of this novel……okay……I can't see anything in this novel...................................................,.....................

Je vais écrire en français. L'intention est bonne mais sincèrement je n'arrive pas à accompagner. Il ya trop d'informations. Après 3 chapitres je ne sais encore pas qui est le personnage principal. Il semble que c'est Naruto et sa sœur jumelle est un Oc. Mais c'est un peut confu. Il ya vraiment trop d'informations. Je lirai peut être après quand j'aurai un peu de temps à perdre. En fait je. Crois pas que soit m'a taxe de thé les fan_fic qui son trop sombre. Bem on verás bien. Sde toute manière félicitations à l'auteur vue qu'il n'est pas facile d'être écrivain.

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Loveee itttt. Is it going to be naruto x rin? If so, then good. If not, then please do so......................................................

Loved it on Ao3, been waiting for updates You can literally feel the increase in quality of writing if you compare the first and the latest chapter. Hope for more updates [img=recommend]