Read until chapter 12 and so far I'm liking this a lot, chapters feel a bit small though. I loved how the second chapter was so dark, instantly pulled me into the story. The abilities of the MC are also interesting, reminds me of a certain scientific accelerator. I was kinda expecting some eye related skill.
Lyl
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LIKEI'm glad you like the story. For the reason of the length of the chapters, each of them tells a specific story. So some will be longer and some shorter. And these powers are well inspired by a certain scientific gas pedal. And who knows about those eyes? Things will get more mysterious and interesting later ;-) Thank you again for your love for my story and I apologize for my English.