This story is fairly good. The character development is impressive, and the building of words? Amazing. Great work. But there is one thing-the readatibility. I noticed that the story gets hard to understand from time to time. Not recommended for someone under 13. And sometimes the world background gets a bit confusing. Apart from this, good job. Keep up.
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