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Dnii_Lii
Dnii_LiiLv13yr
2021-10-04 18:07

The story caught my attention from the first chap with its vivid descriptions. And although the writing quality isn't bad—it just needs a bit of editing--it leaves me confused at times. The characters introduced so far—Sally, Celestin, the MC, and the Monster in the Temple--were enjoyable, to say the least. My only gripe is that the author's constant notes in the story breaks immersion and comes off as jarring. Well, other than that, I hope you keep writing--I added the book to my lib!

A World Where Normal People Don't live

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MIST_VINONA
MIST_VINONALv1

It's a fun read I kinda liked the author notes in the middle of the story feels like I am reading along with the author, [img=recommend][img=recommend]

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_Blue_Iris_
_Blue_Iris_Lv1

Pretty good..........................................but a couple of parts don't make sense, also some minor details....................................but overall solid 4 good read :D keep going author!!!

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Nebula18457
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very interesting so far, can't wait to see what happens next. although you definitely need to work on your grammar. some of your sentences didn't make sense either because of misplaced words, phrasing, or sentence structure.

3yr
NewPrincess_15WJNj
NewPrincess_15WJNjLv2

Dear author I absolutely love this book. It truly is amazing how I can vision a new world through your eyes. Each character is unique in its own way yet they link to form a wonderful master piece known as mystery. You have me hooked to each word and chapter can't wait to see what happens next

2yr
NobleQueenBee
NobleQueenBeeLv5

I really enjoy the author’s humor mixed into what would otherwise be very serious. I can feel the author enjoys writing, which makes me enjoy the story that much more. The story itself is interesting and I look forward to seeing where it goes. Well done!

2yr
Gwenchaena
GwenchaenaLv1

This book is great! I love how the author delivered the story well, even though I got a little surprise reading this, the story went well and I can say that the author did his/her best to write this. Well-written! But yeah, if I can say more, the author just need to separate author's note(put it at the end of the chapters) if needed since I got a little surprise reading 'author' there (nobody thought you sucks, you're doing great!). But overall, This is great, I recommend it!

2yr
GEEGEE
GEEGEELv13

The story was well written and I enjoyed reading it especially with the MC's character. Some things are a bit confusing but overall it is a job well done. Good luck and all the best.

2yr
cBLaISrLIFEma
cBLaISrLIFEmaLv5

Gotta read this one! it's very interesting! I was immediately hooked from the very first long paragraph! And the writing is so awesome! The descriptions gives me a nice image and made it easier to indulge myself in the story. Overall it's freakin good!!

2yr
Xianxie
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interesting premise, i definitely dig the mysterious atmosphere! can't wait for more chapters to learn more about the characters and the overall storyline <333

3yr
Scarlettheartt
ScarletthearttLv10

Surely I got attracted to the theme of the book by the synopsis and then got hooked while reading the first few chapters. Very well written plot. It is so an intriguing story. Your storytelling is great. 👍👍👍💖 Great work fellow author.👍👍👍 I recommend the story to read by everyone. It's really good book.

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