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JJ_Prakoso
JJ_PrakosoLv23yr
2021-08-24 18:56

Okay here are my honest thoughts, I do really like the concept of you using the system in this novel. Most system novels usually love to give a lot of detail about stats that taking over most of the line, but this one is different. The system explanation is pretty short, but yet informative and makes the flow of the story smoother. I also like the character interaction in this novel, it feels like a real human and funny at the same time. The character itself is not irritating and enjoyable to read. The writing itself is quite good especially in how the author describes the happening and atmosphere. It is well detailed and structured at the same time. As for the world building, but I believe the author will expand more other than from the MC sides. However, I do really like the concept of the author using Eastern culture, more specifically Chinese culture which is quite fascinating. The author has also done a splendid job of showing the culture through the character's appearance other things related to the culture. Overall, that's all I have to say about this novel, and thank you. I truly believe this novel has good potential and I am looking forward to it. Keep up the good work!!

Quick Transmigration: The Day I Blew Up My Housemate

CannibalTurtle
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56 Chs

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CannibalTurtle
CannibalTurtleAuthor

Thank you for your honest and detailed review.

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BrewingFantasies
BrewingFantasiesLv3

I'll quick talk about aspects of the book: Strength: - Highly readable grammar - Vivid imagery - Reasonable chapter length - Seemingly well sorted out plot - Dialogues (you can potentially hear the characters speaking in your head) Weakness: - As far as none, however the names were hard af for me to memorize.

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Soun_Phavin
Soun_PhavinLv10

I read the story's first three chapters and I admit that it is good with such an excellent detail of the background, expression, tone and everything. Five stars⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

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IrisSky
IrisSkyLv3

The story starts off quickly. Here I was thinking about what will happen and suddenly I am at the hospital. The characters are strong and well-written. What interests me more is how many words will they hop. The chapters so far are fun to read. And I liked the small explanation you gave below the chapter 2. Helped a lot to understand. And the cover is beautiful. Keep up the good work and I am looking forward to reading more chapters.!! <3 <3

3yr
shalelalo
shalelaloLv4

I love the character so much.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Moonyani
MoonyaniLv11

Nice story! It sounds interresting as well. And there’s the translation for The people who doenst know some words which helps a lot to understand the story. The writing quality is good too. Not to many errors. Keep it up!👏

3yr
Devanshi_Rathod
Devanshi_RathodLv1

Awesome work !! Loved the progression of the story. Descriptions are perfect and characters are well set. loved it. Eagerly waiting for next chapters. keep up the work 😇😇

3yr
Xiaoru
XiaoruLv13

Woah !! Noble but ruthless palace .Good background building. .I like it .Haha the system is funny. Keep up with the good work author .This book has good potential .Update more chapters , looking forward to it .

3yr
Sumayya_Riaz
Sumayya_RiazLv2

Delightful work. this novel is appreciative. keep it up, author! Work hard to achieve your goal. 👍👍👍 the plotting is very admirable. 🌱🌱

3yr
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