Although the fanfic only has 16 chapters, I'm already feeling like it's been quite a journey since MC transferred his memory to his past self. I didn't really see any grammar mistakes throughout the story. The actions of the characters are well justified albeit there are some plot holes visible. I'll still give this 5 stars since it's a unique story that will obviously be attractive to readers who like stereotype villain MCs.

the fanfiction is very nice even if it has few chapters they are long, at the beginning the ff was not great but going on it became more beautiful, the story is about Drakken's revenge, I'm not a fan of Kim possible and I don't seen but I genuinely like the story even if the author could have written a lot more, because if you haven't seen the cartoon it's more difficult to understand, anyway it's a good story

Solid in terms of technical writing. No glaring grammatical errors. The old "if I knew then what I knew now" redo concept, but with a villain and mind-control in the world of Kim Possible.