Review Detail of GodOfDeath1999 in Invincible Colorless Butler

The author is not a native English speaker so I’ll give him a pass when it comes to grammar and punctuation. That being said there are a lot of errors here and there so for people who are annoyed by these types of mistakes you shouldn’t read this novel. Now let’s talk about the MC he’s a former “hero” who according to the synopsis lost all his emotions which is false they were just dulled. The MC regularly shows emotions throughout the story although he seems unaware of this. The MC is also not the brightest crayon in the box so he can be downright frustrating to read about sometimes. I’d say my biggest problem with the series is that there is so much talking during the fights it’s really annoying the enemy sometimes gives pointers information about their actions their abilities, weaknesses etc to the enemy it’s annoying a fight should be silent it’s not a training excercise it’s a fight to the death none of these guys seem to understand this. There have also been some attempts to NTR the MC by the hero and his companion which is extremely frustrating. Anyway I’m done complaining the plot isn’t bad the world building could use some work and the characters definitely need to be flushed out more that’s my advise. Sorry I’m bad at giving constructive criticism.