Review Detail of InfiniteZer0 in Invincible Colorless Butler

Not super far in the story, but I can tell it is an inexperienced author. The story does not have a bad premise, but it is executed kind of poorly. You can feel that they had an idea they really liked, and wanted to tell it as soon as possible, even if is not great for a naturally developing story. It feels forces and rushed. One thing that could be changed for the better, is that some things should be discovered later instead of immediately. Like the fact the the curse will continue across life times, there is no reason for an enemy to tell you that. I could have been found out in the same chapter after the mc has tried to get rid of the curse. Another instance is when the princesses try to get him to remove his mask to see the scars. It could have happened more naturally if he slipped away from the gathering removed the mask and the princesses snuck out and came across him (just met them, but they seem to have that sort of personality).