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In my opinion the author tried to write and emotionless butler but forgot that a lot of decisions have a emotional reason. maybe it's explained but I either missed it or the writing didn't explain it well, I don't know. Anyway why does he keep sighing, this suggest exasperation at the situation or tiredness all things not possible without emotion. this happens again when he becomes a butler, he say he isn't used to seeing this ceiling again suggest he is uncomfortable or something else. how is he feeling these things? also how did he reincarnate if he didn't have emotions. for him at the time there wouldn't have been anything wrong with the situation because how can someone without emotions want something back? he can't experience want.

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Invincible Colorless Butler

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You're right, there are many ways. And this is my way. Thanks for your opinion. 🙏😁

Panda_Stories:true but there are multiple way to do an emotionless person. 1) he could be like a doll and and you show him growing up but focus on the people around him trying to raise him and understand him (example situations: a guy ask him to follow, and he does because he hasn't been hold not to follow people he doesn't know yet / the family struggle to form an emotion connection with him and the struggles during this) lots of things can still be done with a doll. 2) he as no emotions but is able to emulate them but still lacks understanding of them, this can lead to things like a ruthless persona in the eyes of others (example situations: he lack of emotions when taking a life and him learning that he need to hid behind a mask if he was to live with humans/ this can further lead on to him experimenting and trying to take his own life leading him to find the only emotion he has left fear). there is probably more but this is all I could think of now. Anyway it just not very clear what you were going for when you said emotionless and some of the situations are confusing.
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Nzr150ccAuthorNzr150cc

Thanks for your review. If I made him like a robot or a doll, it would be too boring. I want to eat, I want to sleep, I want all my emotions back. It's not that he's emotionless but he doesn't do anything. He wants to live in peace, it doesn't mean he has emotions. But he just didn't want to get into trouble that was meaningless. 🙏🙏✌️

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Panda_StoriesLv13Panda_Stories

true but there are multiple way to do an emotionless person. 1) he could be like a doll and and you show him growing up but focus on the people around him trying to raise him and understand him (example situations: a guy ask him to follow, and he does because he hasn't been hold not to follow people he doesn't know yet / the family struggle to form an emotion connection with him and the struggles during this) lots of things can still be done with a doll. 2) he as no emotions but is able to emulate them but still lacks understanding of them, this can lead to things like a ruthless persona in the eyes of others (example situations: he lack of emotions when taking a life and him learning that he need to hid behind a mask if he was to live with humans/ this can further lead on to him experimenting and trying to take his own life leading him to find the only emotion he has left fear). there is probably more but this is all I could think of now. Anyway it just not very clear what you were going for when you said emotionless and some of the situations are confusing.

Nzr150cc:Thanks for your review. If I made him like a robot or a doll, it would be too boring. I want to eat, I want to sleep, I want all my emotions back. It's not that he's emotionless but he doesn't do anything. He wants to live in peace, it doesn't mean he has emotions. But he just didn't want to get into trouble that was meaningless. 🙏🙏✌️