Review Detail of bear_Freak_2422 in Invincible Colorless Butler

Item: Invincible Colorless Butler
Rating: 3.8

Review detail

bear_Freak_2422Lv32yrbear_Freak_2422

so this is my first time doing this...... ok the story has a good concept?.... I like it but the grammar is making it hard for me to continue on. I could read only to chapter 5.

Invincible Colorless Butler

Nzr150cc

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Nzr150ccAuthorNzr150cc

I'm sorry about that. That's why I rewrote it in my native language. Thanks.

2yr

bear_Freak_2422Lv3bear_Freak_2422

why dont you try a app or program to fix the grammar like grammarly (not sure about the spelling )

Nzr150cc:I'm sorry about that. That's why I rewrote it in my native language. Thanks.

2yr

Nzr150ccAuthorNzr150cc

I tried it, but the problem remains the same. So I can only fix it little by little while writing a new chapter. 😭

bear_Freak_2422:why dont you try a app or program to fix the grammar like grammarly (not sure about the spelling )

2yr

AimanFaroqqLv15AimanFaroqq

You dont take tthe subscription obviously it wont fix..dont be disheartened .jjst try to gget an editor

Nzr150cc:I tried it, but the problem remains the same. So I can only fix it little by little while writing a new chapter. 😭

2yr

CountWatermelonTMLv4CountWatermelonTM

Grammarly covers quite a bit

bear_Freak_2422:why dont you try a app or program to fix the grammar like grammarly (not sure about the spelling )

2yr

s_cosmosLv3s_cosmos

Please check out my book as well, for the purpose of review, I need to write ahead accordingly! NAME: MY PRINCE IS A VAMPIRE; TRANSMIGRATION

2yr

BloodbringerLv1Bloodbringer

I would proofread for you, but i doubt you would let a random stranger do that😅

Nzr150cc:I tried it, but the problem remains the same. So I can only fix it little by little while writing a new chapter. 😭

2yr

UnknownuserleftLv13Unknownuserleft

harem?

1yr