Review Detail of ManasCiel in Invincible Colorless Butler

Item: Invincible Colorless Butler
Rating: 3.6

Review detail

ManasCielLv142yrManasCiel

I really liked the idea of the story. It caught my interest. But after reading through 7 chapters(9), I am done. :/ There are thing that may catch others attention but its not my cup of tea. (Everything other than Writing Quality is a 4/5.) The writing is grammatically wrong in many places and it makes the sentences not make sense and hard to comprehend what is ment. (I have seen worse so 2/5.) I know English is confusing so dont worry about it to much. But I got board of the story. :/ (Sorry that the ‘first’ review is a negative one.)

Invincible Colorless Butler

Nzr150cc

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Nzr150ccAuthorNzr150cc

No, I think I should thank for your advice and criticism. My English grammar is bad, I admit it. I'll fix it soon. 🙏

2yr

RebelGodZZLv14RebelGodZZ

Complain about grammar, spells bored wrong

2yr

ManasCielLv14ManasCiel

Complains about my grammar, doesn’t add a period.

RebelGodZZ:Complain about grammar, spells bored wrong

2yr

Black_Light9949Lv12Black_Light9949

Complains about someone, who is complaining about former's review, but doesn't spell meant right.

ManasCiel:Complains about my grammar, doesn’t add a period.
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2yr

ManasCielLv14ManasCiel

I meant* my previous response as a joke because I found it funny that he made a mistake while calling me out on a mistake. Also in my original review I said English is confusing, it proves my point. Pronounced the same but spelled different. (I’m hunan, I make mistakes.)

Black_Light9949:Complains about someone, who is complaining about former's review, but doesn't spell meant right.

2yr

SolomoleculeLv13Solomolecule

REEEEEEEEEEE

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Narutoss5Lv12Narutoss5

not REeeeeeeee. It's Re.... ZERO KARA HAJIMERU ISEKAI SEIKATSU

Solomolecule:REEEEEEEEEEE
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SolomoleculeLv13Solomolecule

bruh[img=faceslap]

Narutoss5:not REeeeeeeee. It's Re.... ZERO KARA HAJIMERU ISEKAI SEIKATSU

2yr

LucasMYeetLv14LucasMYeet

too*

2yr

ThanatosGreekGodLv14ThanatosGreekGod

Complains about someone elses complaints but forgets to mention how amazing Barred Rock hens are….

ManasCiel:Complains about my grammar, doesn’t add a period.
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2yr

RebelGodZZLv14RebelGodZZ

Who tf puts periods in the comments on this app?

ManasCiel:Complains about my grammar, doesn’t add a period.
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2yr

ManasCielLv14ManasCiel

Authors?

RebelGodZZ:Who tf puts periods in the comments on this app?

2yr

MonthLv13Month

Thats a lot of complaints.

Black_Light9949:Complains about someone, who is complaining about former's review, but doesn't spell meant right.

2yr

AmataratsulLv15Amataratsul

Don’ mind the grammar but his personality at the end of the first volume just made me drop. Sorry man. Amazing concept, grammar could be better but compared to mt’s could be worse

Nzr150cc:No, I think I should thank for your advice and criticism. My English grammar is bad, I admit it. I'll fix it soon. 🙏

2yr