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BLACK_GLOOM
BLACK_GLOOMLv42yrBLACK_GLOOM

MC character is not my type , he is too calculative and cold . Yes, he's in marvel world , so what he got a cheat. Why act like a young master in cultivation novels. If the MC is toned down , I will like it

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ElG0hary
ElG0haryLv5ElG0hary

maybe because he is a chinese fanfic

asia_fsjsu92926
asia_fsjsu92926Lv13asia_fsjsu92926

bro this was actually written by some young master... what can expect

ElG0hary:maybe because he is a chinese fanfic
Yasar_Azimi
Yasar_AzimiAuthorYasar_Azimi

this is not mine and I'm just reposting it here. look at synopsis.

Great_Young_Master
Great_Young_MasterLv4Great_Young_Master

Nah, just being a Chinese fanfic isn't enough. I've read a chinese fanfic that actually has good plot, character development, and grammar. Just from the sypnosis you can notice tons of mistake that shouldn't even have if you have an app that helps with your grammar.

ElG0hary:maybe because he is a chinese fanfic
Lutheris_right
Lutheris_rightLv2Lutheris_right

Please tell me the name of the book. All the Chinese fanfics I have read have been written my young masters.

Great_Young_Master:Nah, just being a Chinese fanfic isn't enough. I've read a chinese fanfic that actually has good plot, character development, and grammar. Just from the sypnosis you can notice tons of mistake that shouldn't even have if you have an app that helps with your grammar.
Great_Young_Master
Great_Young_MasterLv4Great_Young_Master

Well, I forgot the name of the fanfic but it usually gets like and I get notifications whenever someone liked it so I'm gonna tell ya once someone likes it because I remmeber making a comment in the story. Though, I know a Chinese original novel (not a fanfic) that I read and its name is Legendary Mechanic. The MC is gray and I actually like the antagonists in the novel because they have certain motives they wanted, like this multiplied eyes that wanted his people to become better. Not to mention the MC is super smart and the world building of the novel took inspiration from One Piece. Even at chapter one, there are mentions of future enemies and allies throughout of it. I could tell that the author really planned the novel from it's very first chapter.

Lutheris_right:Please tell me the name of the book. All the Chinese fanfics I have read have been written my young masters.
PheonixRising41
PheonixRising41Lv15PheonixRising41

That is probably one of the only Chinese novels on here that is incredibly good in my opinion. Though I'll admit that I've come to like most Chinese novels now because it seems like all the others are Japanese *shudders* or cringe harem novels where the MC's turn into side characters at best.

Great_Young_Master:Well, I forgot the name of the fanfic but it usually gets like and I get notifications whenever someone liked it so I'm gonna tell ya once someone likes it because I remmeber making a comment in the story. Though, I know a Chinese original novel (not a fanfic) that I read and its name is Legendary Mechanic. The MC is gray and I actually like the antagonists in the novel because they have certain motives they wanted, like this multiplied eyes that wanted his people to become better. Not to mention the MC is super smart and the world building of the novel took inspiration from One Piece. Even at chapter one, there are mentions of future enemies and allies throughout of it. I could tell that the author really planned the novel from it's very first chapter.
StuckInTheInternet
StuckInTheInternetLv4StuckInTheInternet

I wanted to ask if you know a place where I can find Chinese fanfiction with good translation. Most translated fanfiction is borderline unreadable and this one seems pretty good compared to most.

Yasar_Azimi:this is not mine and I'm just reposting it here. look at synopsis.