nothing against the translator but... what's wrong with the Chinese and their arrogant characters...[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

MC character is not my type , he is too calculative and cold . Yes, he's in marvel world , so what he got a cheat. Why act like a young master in cultivation novels. If the MC is toned down , I will like it

I know u just posting this here author/translator this review is on the story not u Some chinese ideals and most chinese dialouge should never be used in an american setting one its unrealistic and very trashy maybe if your some “young master” type reader then its probably your taste (even though its garbage) and two it just doesnt fit also whoever wrote this did a very half hearted job at it and thats me considering other chinese ff that are set in non chinese countrys not tryna be racists but most chinese writer that post their work on here are very 1 dimensional you can either see the plot and where its hoin in the first 50 chapters of you can just smell the racism in the first chapter this ff is like that

this is a half hearted attempt at writing a marvel fan-fic. the main character is hallow etc no personality at all. there's alot of spelling,grammar mistakes.

I read till Ch114 and stopped due to the horrible English. This is Chinese MCU. But I learnt something different from this. When I started reading, I was always frustrated with the heavy Chinese bias. But as I read on, the Chinese references and the MC's decisions began to look funny to me. But Beyond Ch114, the quality of English drops significantly as if the difference before this chapter and the later ones is like the difference between the Heaven and Earth (hehe, maybe I am influenced by the Chinese bs). Remember: 1. All the things that happen, happen due to the plans of the mc and is always completely under his control. 2. MC always radiates a cold, calm and confident temperament. 3. MC in any black outfit looks like a Death-God that has come to the mortal realm to reap the lives of mortal. 4. Everyone is like a pawn (not even other chess pieces) to the MC, their only worth is to wait for the MC to step on them to reach greater heights.

MC doesn't have any sensible relationships. He'd only nurture or be 'friends' with someone so he'd download their abilities. And what's with chinese authors and thinking everyone is racist towards them while being really racist. MC's also a groomer, he did that for Wanda. The author just turned everyone into chinese characters. It's not sensible to write a western novel if you don't even know how they talk or behave. The author doesn't even know the personalities of normal Marvel characters. If you want to enjoy the novel, try to block out the weird racist ideas and stop at about chapter 150, it stops making sense after then.

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i know the writing may annoy some people but I have wanted to read this for a while but the only other place i could find it has pay to view after chapter 59 so I am can finally read some of this novel