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As a male...I don't really read any romance or reverse harem stories, But still read it anyway, so far, I could say that the novel is good. 1. Writing quality is better than some other originals, with proper grammar and punctuation, well I am not some expert in it. 2. Story is common, there are many other stories on the same theme, but still enjoyable as always.... 3. Character design is good, but can be improved, if you could also add inner thoughts and reactions from other side characters like the Mc. 4. Updating stability is good as well. 5. I can't much say about the World development, since I haven't read the whole chapters yet......but it would be good if author could give atleast some description about the empire and the continent that Mc is living in.....would still give five stars anyway.

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Irene The Lady Who Turned Down Fate

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Thanks for such a detailed review and I am glad to know that you liked the strip so far even thou you aren't really into romance novels. And I will take note of your points and won't on them as for the world building I have given the info in further chapters since I forgot about it in the first chapters.đŸ˜