Review Detail of Tangerqueen in Irene The Lady Who Turned Down Fate

Ok I think you asked for a genuine review, so just a full heads up that there isn't much sugarcoating here. First, I just wanted to say that congrats for writing your first original work! The attempt is definitely there, and I just wanted to say good luck first and foremost. Also, really really sorry for the late review. I tried to take the time to read each chapter a bit more carefully before leaving this review. Writing Quality (3/5): I think this was my main deduction for this novel. I had to read a few sentences a few times, and the frequent grammatical errors and spelling and even punctuation errors sometimes were a bit distracting. However, please please take this with a grain of salt (or maybe even a bucket of salt). I'm just really picky about how books are written, and I usually just dock another point for frequent spelling/punctuation mistakes because they can be pretty easily fixed with another look at the chapter. That being said, I think the general pacing of the story was a bit confusing for me. There was a lot of information being presented all at once sometimes, but at other times, the pacing would be relatively slice of life. Updates (5/5): You got this :D You're honestly really hardworking, and I just wanted to say great job so far!!! Story Development (4/5): I must admit that this plot was a bit tropey. I think there wasn't anything in particular that stood out to me other than the reverse harem part, but I also just personally am not a super big fan of them (so might just be me). Once again, I just thought that there were some sections with a ton of information and some others without much being presented. Character Design (5/5): I love Ashton. Honestly enough said. World Background (5/5): There wasn't anything in particular that stood out for the world background, but I could tell that you had invested thought into making it! All in all, good luck with the rest of the story! It was a really enjoyable read.