Review Detail of ric3cak3 in Irene The Lady Who Turned Down Fate

Okay so um I like the idea of the story, it's pretty creative. The characters are pretty well-written. Overall, I'd say that the book is great, probably because I'm biased cuz I'm a sucker for reincarnation stories. However, there are a few things that the author must consider: Given that this is your first novel, it's pretty great. Definitely could use some edits here and there, but nothing that can't be resolved by proofreading. The situation setting is described beautifully but there are places where it's awkward (?) Perhaps it's due to over-explaining it, I'm not really sure. Conversations sometimes feel stunted, as if it's something that they wouldn't say in that situation (?) It doesn't disrupt the flow of the story, but it's sort of annoying sometimes. [I'm so sorry author T-T] Anyways, I hope you take my words with a grain of salt and use it further improve your writing skills. Let's all learn from our mistakes and become the next Rick Riordan :> !! Great work author, keep it up!!