Review Detail of Cloud031 in Pokemon : Evolve
Review detail
I don't really care about author's writing style. It's average. The real problem I have is how MC takes lightly of reincarnating in pokemon world. Why give away two good pokemons and take two eggs that will hatch meowths. It's just a dumb decision. Also his father is a champion and mother is a pokemon researcher. He could train with his dad or try learning more about pokemon with his mom but no. He just had to travel alone because of what, it makes him look cool and independent? Heck no, it's just retarded! What pisses me off more is that the guy will probably become a really strong trainer because HE IS the MC, not because he's smart, decisive or adaptive. I'm just complaining this much because of the sheer amount of expectation I had for this fanfic before reading. I even put it in my library since this is a pokemon fanfic. Well... not everything will go according to what readers want so anyone reading this, give it a chance before you leave. It might be your cup of tea, who knows... For me, I consider this fanfic to be lighthearted and very little detailed. Also emotional MCs who use their heart instead of brains are not my thing. 3 stars from me. Author need to put more details even if you want to make it more like a journal. Just a suggestion. The lack of details probably made the protagonist worse in my opinion.
Pokemon : Evolve
freakofntur
Liked it!
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Fine..I will give it a try. I know how hard it is to write fanfics so this is the least I can do for you.
freakofntur:bro, try out others chapters, of you ever saw potential in the fic, please check out more chapters, I know you'll like it also Grass/Ghost is a fascinating, but ultimately average typing with nothing special. Both those Pokemon have a signature moves that I still plan on abusing, that's why they are in the story in the first place. regarding Meowth, they will not evolve into Persian, but custom Pokemon that will be on par with legendary. but I guess you'll never find out. Unless of course you give it another shot Also I think you are underestimating the stress M/C was in after reincarnation. people make emotional decisions when they are emotional or under stress.
bro, try out others chapters, of you ever saw potential in the fic, please check out more chapters, I know you'll like it also Grass/Ghost is a fascinating, but ultimately average typing with nothing special. Both those Pokemon have a signature moves that I still plan on abusing, that's why they are in the story in the first place. regarding Meowth, they will not evolve into Persian, but custom Pokemon that will be on par with legendary. but I guess you'll never find out. Unless of course you give it another shot Also I think you are underestimating the stress M/C was in after reincarnation. people make emotional decisions when they are emotional or under stress.