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2024-08-09 06:03

I liked the story, not a masterpiece, but it was funny enough. BUT, there are 2 big problems: the translation is... painful, even more so towards the end. And the ending was... not really an ending? If it wasn't because it's marked as complete, I couldn't have guessed it was the last chapter. The last 100 ch or so, I ignored the translation to reach the ending... As I said, I liked the story well enough, but I leave dissapointed.

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20 chapter review with spoilers ahead. Think โ€˜Big Shotโ€™s Reincarnation Sweeps the Worldโ€™ for this one. Long lost daughter is finally found. Lots of books like this actually. Breakdown of characters and story: ๐Ÿ”ฌ - FL is a genius (science and medicine) and focuses on her research. She doesnโ€™t like to talk a lot so if youโ€™re looking for a FL who will express her feelings and speak up for herself, read another book. This girl has a high IQ and low EQ. She goes to school as a student instead of telling her parents sheโ€™s actually a professor, because she doesnโ€™t speak up for herself. I guess speaking is harder than wasting time as a student at school? The longest conversation she was able to have so far was with the ML. ๐Ÿ›- ML is also a genius who is trying to woo the FL through cooking food. Sheโ€™s a foodie and only likes his food. Since she doesnโ€™t care about interpersonal relationships that much, romance is not on any agenda for her. The challenge is real for him. ๐Ÿ˜‘- The grandmother is an evil witch who openly insults the FL and favors her cousin sister (enter green tea/fake white lotus). ๐Ÿคข- The cousin sister or green tea ๐Ÿต witch wants to be the only girl in the family. Her parents arenโ€™t alive anymore. She also wants to keep her marriage contract with some family that the FL was meant to have. Basically your normal crazy jealous girl who cries and manipulates the crowd. ๐Ÿ›- The mother. So overdramatic! ๐Ÿ™„ Sheโ€™s very over the top to the extent that she annoyed me at times. This woman is so grateful that her daughter has her good looks, because even though she grew up in the country and isnโ€™t that smart, she can she be a good TROPHY WIFE๐Ÿ˜. These were legit this womanโ€™s thoughts. Both mother and father donโ€™t actually spend time to get to know their daughter when she arrives but make a lot of false assumptions about her. That being said, they both do love her. ๐Ÿงธ- Her 3 brothers have not shown up yet but you know they are going to be doting brothers. ๐Ÿ“– The book so far is filled with characters having little or bad communication which leads to unnecessary circumstances. Also has an idiotic peanut gallery audience who make a lot of bad assumptions about the FL because sheโ€™s from the country. I did not like how abruptly the parents picked her up and brought her home. They also donโ€™t defend her against the grandmotherโ€™s continuous insults. There are some funny parts in this that are enjoyable. Overall I give it a rating of 3 stars โญ๏ธ.

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