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lil_warrior
lil_warriorLv153yr
2021-09-09 03:11

The storyline itself is good, but the grammar and spelling is a tad off. Also alot more details could be added in to give more insight and help the reader visualise it more (that's just my opinion though) but if not it's still a good transmigration story. Hope more updates arrive soon.

Rebirth Of The Big Shot

LittleRabbit1111
4.2
284 Chs

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LittleRabbit1111
LittleRabbit1111Author

I will correct the mistakes, thank you for your review. [^_^]

3yr
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Tzin99
Tzin99Lv15

This is the style of story I like and your english is not bad. I think that there will be a lot of funny moments, and face-slaps.like all this kind of stories, the end is pretty obvious, but what I find interesting is to know how you will reach this happy ending. I wish you great success.

3yr

Anna_Joseph_2442
Anna_Joseph_2442Lv11

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UnspokenBeauty
UnspokenBeautyLv15

Its a confused mess! The story doesnt flow properly and needs to be revised. I was really looking forward to the story but something’s Need to be cleaned up. How she got her skills through the capsule? Is she was a psychic since birth couldnt she have seen her outcome by following the man? She was a novel at 6 and transmigrated over 20? How did she die before?

3yr
Shanaya_Gupta_1208
Shanaya_Gupta_1208Lv4

hey author,did you again forgot to upload the chapters?? it's been 5days since u uploaded when are u going to upload new chapters....

1yr
Gelam_John
Gelam_JohnLv4

I like it but there is no daily updates 😓[img=fp][img=coins][img=coins]

2yr
Gallant11
Gallant11Lv4

letter to the author of this novel: Dear Author, Even thou at the beginning the novel seems to look like the business woman at school, but nevertheless I invested my time in reading through it to chapter 80+ because there was a difference only for me to see that you had stop updating the story for the past 24 days, WHY??

2yr
Shanaya_Gupta_1208
Shanaya_Gupta_1208Lv4

hey author why are u not uploading new chapters??

1yr
DaoistrKfpta
DaoistrKfptaLv1

It's an absolutely fantasstic work of fiction!! Tough I think you might need some time to adjust to the plot still once you are 2 chapters in boy you are hooked thennn!!!❤️ Loved the work more power to you LittleRabbit! -FuriousHobbit!

2yr
BlueFlame_Mecc
BlueFlame_MeccLv14

The development of the story is pretty good. I had waited for a couple of days to read this book, and I'm satisfied with the result of my waiting. The only thing I can hold the author accountable, is the almost no use of commas. But it's nothing bad. Keep going my dear author, I like your story. (One of the few that makes me buy chapters after buying coins...) lol

2yr
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