Review Detail of ydoBoN in Marvel: Meditation System

The story began great, The first 2 "arcs" did fine. When he was imprison and the magic learning arc were by far my favorites. But as soon as we began the avengers arc all went down hill fast. The change in quality and content was so abrupt and grant that it felt like a completely different fic. The character interaction were kinda awful, everyone acted completely out of character (even the MC), the plot took a hard decline with cheap story progression (The mission thing with Widow is something I expect from a comedy/crack fic) the explanation behind this event was somehow worse. The power levels and types were good thought, I enjoy your creativity with Nen and it's conjugation, I also applaud you for giving your character logical weaknesses. Loved the balance, nevertheless my enjoyment of the story kinda died after the magic training, you kept saying that you are going to rewrite the story so you didn't have to fix it right away and I belive this tax your story quite a bit. In my opinion you should have worked a bit more on the overall direction and structure of the story even if it meant a slower pace. Also if you have any sort of negative feeling towards a faction (shield) you have to work around it, instead of just making a "bashing" paragraph every chapter. You made shield too evil and stupidly clumpsy to be believable. You want to destroy it or kill everyone in it, that's fine, but don't try to justify it by making every decision they took cartoonishly evil. (Fury and Colson are supposed to be charismatic and smart, your take on them was everything but)